Book Miner - The Shapeshifters' Library: Released by Amber Polo - Chapter 10

Chapter 10 of The Shapeshifters’ Library: Released by Amber Polo…

Synopsis

The werewolves meet at the Bistro to discuss the problems that have recently arrived, including Dustbunnie, who was not originally invited. Needless to say, she is miffed at the mockery of her position as the Alpha.

After the meeting, Dustbunnie visits Burney to discuss the latter’s book-stealing activities.

Finally, we get a glimpse of Godiva’s undying affection for the Griswold, two shapeshifting dogs who live in the basement.

Analysis

This chapter, like many of the chapters in this book I’m finding, are composed mostly of reflection and conversation. While dialog is an important element in any story, too much is a distraction from the actual things that are happening (or should be happening) on the page.

The one-sided relationship between Godiva and Griswold has been building in parts up til now. So far, I see little to no value in it.

And as a mostly unrelated aside, I have a question about dog shapeshifter physiology. So, some dogs, at birth, have cropped tails, ears, or toes. Do the shapeshifters have this done when they’re young? If so, does it reflect on their human bodies? Like, if they lose a toe, are they missing the corresponding toe? And if not, what if they lost an arm or eye? Or is it just “magic”? “I’m a shapey-shiftey dog, and I want to look like a Pomeranian! Boom!” And if that’s the case, why can’t they alter their “breed” at will?

Just a few questions to leave you with. On to the next chapter...